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Can't Seem to get it right...
Tweet Topic Started: Jan 29 2016, 02:04 AM (1,968 Views)
Saberoph	Jan 29 2016, 02:04 AM Post #1
Posts: 11,517 Group: Member Member #5,650 Joined: January 23, 2011 Gender Male Country United States Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Internet Explorer Favourite Manga Dragon Ball Z	I can't seem to get his right arm, midsection and his hair. Any advice?
	Batman Arkham Games Discussion. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8487015/1/ Q&A With Me. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8408853/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8410747/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk 2.0 http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8543860/1/ My Broli Idea. http://dbzf.co.uk/single/?p=8716209&t=8374201 Dragon Ball Paramountcy. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8561069/1/ Intellectual savior of the masses.


Goddess Ultimecia	Jan 29 2016, 02:13 AM Post #2
Posts: 10,145 Group: RP Moderator Member #8,473 Joined: October 26, 2012 Gender Male Country None	Saberoph Jan 29 2016, 02:04 AM I can't seem to get his right arm, midsection and his hair. Any advice? For the arm, flip the hand so that the palm is pointed to the sky. The elbow region then should be easy to fix since you can get it straighter without wonkifying it.
	NinjaSushi Colouring Credit to NinjaSushi for the colouring


Saberoph	Jan 29 2016, 03:02 AM Post #3
Posts: 11,517 Group: Member Member #5,650 Joined: January 23, 2011 Gender Male Country United States Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Internet Explorer Favourite Manga Dragon Ball Z	Thanks. I think it's an improvement, even though something looks off about his This drawing is more or less based off this. Quote: He usually wears a long black and blood red duster with an elvish hood stitched to the top collar, that he takes off before he fights...unless it's a complete stomp match for him. A Loose Blood Red Muscle Shirt, Black baggy Combat Pants tucked into black Boots with red detail (A cross between Bulma's Saiyan Armor Boots and Future Trunks' Boots), a black with silver studded belt, blood red finger-less gloves going up to the elbows. Bangs that come down 2 inches past his ears, the rest of his hair comes down to his shoulders. Standing 6 feet tall, 240lbs solid muscle, with a dark red aura. Edited by Saberoph, Jan 29 2016, 03:24 AM.
	Batman Arkham Games Discussion. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8487015/1/ Q&A With Me. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8408853/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8410747/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk 2.0 http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8543860/1/ My Broli Idea. http://dbzf.co.uk/single/?p=8716209&t=8374201 Dragon Ball Paramountcy. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8561069/1/ Intellectual savior of the masses.


Goddess Ultimecia	Jan 29 2016, 03:27 AM Post #4
Posts: 10,145 Group: RP Moderator Member #8,473 Joined: October 26, 2012 Gender Male Country None	Make the midsection take up more length. He looks like those Family Guy skits' characters making fun of incredibly high pants detectives.
	NinjaSushi Colouring Credit to NinjaSushi for the colouring


Saberoph	Jan 29 2016, 04:48 AM Post #5
Posts: 11,517 Group: Member Member #5,650 Joined: January 23, 2011 Gender Male Country United States Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Internet Explorer Favourite Manga Dragon Ball Z	I thought the same thing, but I also thought his waist and left leg was too fat as well. It's still not great, but I think I'm making progress.
	Batman Arkham Games Discussion. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8487015/1/ Q&A With Me. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8408853/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8410747/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk 2.0 http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8543860/1/ My Broli Idea. http://dbzf.co.uk/single/?p=8716209&t=8374201 Dragon Ball Paramountcy. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8561069/1/ Intellectual savior of the masses.


Saberoph	Feb 2 2016, 12:06 AM Post #6
Posts: 11,517 Group: Member Member #5,650 Joined: January 23, 2011 Gender Male Country United States Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Internet Explorer Favourite Manga Dragon Ball Z	Update* Still not great, but I think I've made improvements. I realized what the problem was with his mid section. I drew it being a different angle than the rest of his body, so it was way off in how it looked. I also made some changes to his hair, I also made his right leg a little bigger too. This is just his Base, so imagine what his SS would look like. Heck, think about what an SS3 would look like.
	Batman Arkham Games Discussion. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8487015/1/ Q&A With Me. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8408853/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8410747/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk 2.0 http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8543860/1/ My Broli Idea. http://dbzf.co.uk/single/?p=8716209&t=8374201 Dragon Ball Paramountcy. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8561069/1/ Intellectual savior of the masses.


Saberoph	Feb 9 2016, 04:41 AM Post #7
Posts: 11,517 Group: Member Member #5,650 Joined: January 23, 2011 Gender Male Country United States Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Internet Explorer Favourite Manga Dragon Ball Z	Decided to kind of take the tight shirt approach, of course it's not perfect, but I think I'm making progress...sort of. Edited by Saberoph, Feb 9 2016, 04:44 AM.
	Batman Arkham Games Discussion. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8487015/1/ Q&A With Me. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8408853/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8410747/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk 2.0 http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8543860/1/ My Broli Idea. http://dbzf.co.uk/single/?p=8716209&t=8374201 Dragon Ball Paramountcy. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8561069/1/ Intellectual savior of the masses.


Saberoph	Feb 12 2016, 05:49 AM Post #8
Posts: 11,517 Group: Member Member #5,650 Joined: January 23, 2011 Gender Male Country United States Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Internet Explorer Favourite Manga Dragon Ball Z	I'm making progress now, you can see his midsection has better detail and his abs look much better than the last upload.
	Batman Arkham Games Discussion. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8487015/1/ Q&A With Me. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8408853/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8410747/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk 2.0 http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8543860/1/ My Broli Idea. http://dbzf.co.uk/single/?p=8716209&t=8374201 Dragon Ball Paramountcy. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8561069/1/ Intellectual savior of the masses.


Vertical	Feb 12 2016, 08:29 PM Post #9
Posts: 2,542 Group: Member Member #8,475 Joined: October 27, 2012	Nice progress, Saberoph... especially that abs update. One thing that might be throwing it off a little, at least in my opinion, is the size of his head. I think it could be the tiniest bit bigger...
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lazerbem	Feb 12 2016, 08:36 PM Post #10
Posts: 10,662 Group: Forum Moderator Member #10,435 Joined: November 1, 2013 Gender Male Country United States Favourite Anime Asura's Wrath(it counts) What Browser do you use? Google Chrome	Yeah, the last one is probably the best improvement. I think the only issue is the ratio of size between the head, torso, and limbs
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Saberoph	Feb 13 2016, 03:35 AM Post #11
Posts: 11,517 Group: Member Member #5,650 Joined: January 23, 2011 Gender Male Country United States Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Internet Explorer Favourite Manga Dragon Ball Z	Yeah, once I can finally get the details right, I'm going to redraw it with the proper proportions. I ended up using several different reference pictures for detail and what not, so that's why things aren't exactly right. Thanks for the feedback, I always appreciate input and suggestions. Also, when I'm done I'll be posting them all together to show my progress from beginning to end. I would also like to point out that I took these pictures with my phone, so his legs look shorter than they really are...somehow I couldn't get the angle right when I took the picture. Edited by Saberoph, Feb 13 2016, 02:52 PM.
	Batman Arkham Games Discussion. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8487015/1/ Q&A With Me. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8408853/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8410747/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk 2.0 http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8543860/1/ My Broli Idea. http://dbzf.co.uk/single/?p=8716209&t=8374201 Dragon Ball Paramountcy. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8561069/1/ Intellectual savior of the masses.


Vertical	Feb 27 2016, 09:59 PM Post #12
Posts: 2,542 Group: Member Member #8,475 Joined: October 27, 2012	Hey Saber, any progress?
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Saberoph	Feb 29 2016, 06:15 PM Post #13
Posts: 11,517 Group: Member Member #5,650 Joined: January 23, 2011 Gender Male Country United States Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Internet Explorer Favourite Manga Dragon Ball Z	Slowly, there's been some serious medical stuff going on within the family...so I had to push everything to the side until everything got sorted, and thankfully it looks like things are finally calming down so I can continue this and my story. I would've already been done with my redrawing, but I can't draw when I'm stressed, I have to be completely relaxed. Edit: I'm working on it as I'm typing this, but I'm taking my time with it and paying very close attention to his proportions, so hopefully this time I won't have to make as much or hardly any corrections this time around. Edited by Saberoph, Mar 3 2016, 07:12 PM.
	Batman Arkham Games Discussion. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8487015/1/ Q&A With Me. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8408853/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8410747/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk 2.0 http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8543860/1/ My Broli Idea. http://dbzf.co.uk/single/?p=8716209&t=8374201 Dragon Ball Paramountcy. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8561069/1/ Intellectual savior of the masses.


Saberoph	Mar 3 2016, 08:26 PM Post #14
Posts: 11,517 Group: Member Member #5,650 Joined: January 23, 2011 Gender Male Country United States Favourite Anime Dragon Ball Z What Browser do you use? Internet Explorer Favourite Manga Dragon Ball Z	Personally, I think this is my best update. I drew it again in a new sketch pad, so I had more room to work with this time. Obviously it's not perfect and it still needs more work, but I think I'm getting a lot better and seem to be possibly getting back into the swing of things. The lines are very light, so it may be hard to see but I didn't want the lines to be so dark that I have those ugly lines behind when I fix my mistakes. As always I look forward to feedback and I'm always open to suggestions.
	Batman Arkham Games Discussion. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8487015/1/ Q&A With Me. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8408853/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8410747/1/ Dragon Ball Game Talk 2.0 http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8543860/1/ My Broli Idea. http://dbzf.co.uk/single/?p=8716209&t=8374201 Dragon Ball Paramountcy. http://dbzf.co.uk/topic/8561069/1/ Intellectual savior of the masses.


Goddess Ultimecia	Mar 3 2016, 08:41 PM Post #15
Posts: 10,145 Group: RP Moderator Member #8,473 Joined: October 26, 2012 Gender Male Country None	Looks like he suffered a horrible accident that broke his left leg at the knee and he's never recovered since. Might want to straighten it out a little bit.
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